LEVEL 4 17/20 : All posts are neat and highly informative with outstanding detail and content. WHAT TO IMPROVE: To improve, you may want to include a conclusion paragraph at the end of each post to explain why the task is relevant and appropriate for the coursework project, and what you have learnt from it.
ALEX Level 4 17/20 : You have done very detailed in depth posts and also your layout is very swarve and simple looking, yet your work is hard hitting and gives a real insight to your concept idea What to improve : as rosie said you could end each post by explaining why the task is relevant for the coursework we are doing and what you have learnt from it
LEVEL 4 17/20 : All posts are neat and highly informative with outstanding detail and content.
ReplyDeleteWHAT TO IMPROVE: To improve, you may want to include a conclusion paragraph at the end of each post to explain why the task is relevant and appropriate for the coursework project, and what you have learnt from it.
ALEX Level 4 17/20 : You have done very detailed in depth posts and also your layout is very swarve and simple looking, yet your work is hard hitting and gives a real insight to your concept idea
ReplyDeleteWhat to improve : as rosie said you could end each post by explaining why the task is relevant for the coursework we are doing and what you have learnt from it